Seduction On Steroids: E-Mails

Email Seduction – How To Write Emails That Get Replies From Her, GUARANTEED

Have you ever wished for somebody to tell you how emails need to be written, so that women will actually respond?

Well, you're not alone…

If you wish to learn how to pen killer emails that virtually GUARANTEES replies, then you're in for a real treat today.

I will share an email here that a TRL subscriber named Myke sent. Myke is a little overwhelmed right now because he has been out of the dating game for so long.

MYKE'S EMAIL:

Thank you, Derek, I would appreciate any advice you would give me.

I am 25 years old and haven't had a girlfriend for seven-and-a-half months now – ever since I got out of a long-term relationship (it had lasted five long years).

Naturally, I haven't been able to date a lot of other women before or build a set of skills to regularly talk to women, for that matter. I have researched on the game, and have begun to see some success in dating, but here's the thing… I want to make it in online dating now, too.

My biggest problem is looking for things to bust female balls about while staying playful in my emails. Could you look at the email I'm sending and tell me if I'm doing anything wrong? Any advice would be awesome.

Here's the email I'm sending… it was a teasing email to a typo she made on her profile… where she had spelled 'alcohol' as alcahol:

SUBJECT: RE: YOUR BRAND NEW NICKNAME

Nicole dear,

Alcohol is spelled with two o's. Oh my! :-)

Let me tell you something, 'spelling bee'. Email me with three qualities that you
have that would get me to find out more about you. Naturally, I will do the same
for you and will even send you an extra photo if I like your response.

Myke

Derek, any feedback will really be appreciated
Thanks a lot,
Myke

MY REPLY TO MYKE:

After reading your question, Luke, I felt a deeper problem than just 'Hey Derek, what can I say when talking to women over the Internet to get them poon-tang?'

What you're trying to tell me is: 'I feel like I have to try extremely hard to get a woman online interested in me, but I don't know any smart things to say.'

In other words, I felt "faulty logic" come out of you.

This is why.

You aren't beginning from the right place, so when you do, everything else doesn't end up right, either.

You seem to think that you need to try to get a woman's attention and this is what most guys online seem to think. (I will teach you how this problem can be fixed in a bit).

Myke, here's the problem. You are OVER-SELLING yourself.

Hopefully, you already have an "Optimized Profile" set up according to my techniques inside the Online Dating Playbook™, and are aware of what most guys write to women online…

They all write the same thing.

EVERY guy today tries to impress women.

EVERY guy today sends out BORING emails.

To get women online interested in you, you need to seem totally DIFFERENT than the rest of the guys out there.

Naturally, the Online Dating Playbook™ comes with my whole email system, such as the vital factors you have to know, the huge mistakes you need to stay away from, and my very specific techniques on how to produce effective personal emails. However, I want to make one thing clear today…

WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG HERE?

Myke, I think you are doing everything wrong in your email. You are attempting to use things that may work OFFline, and are trying to put them to use online.

THIS HARDLY EVER WORKS.

This is why.

The tools that are available aren't the same (read: eye contact, body language, tone and voice).

Online, girls only see words on the screen and that is IT.

When the majority of guys try to put the entire "cocky funny" thing to use online, they appear TOO cocky without being funny enough.

This is not joke.

GUESS WHAT ELSE?

Whenever a woman reads your email – the one you wasted 10 minutes typing – it appears as the complete OPPOSITE of your actual intentions.

The end.

Oh, and remember: your email will probably be the 36th one that she opens that day. Therefore, if you cannot create intrigue AND curiosity… your email will just get deleted like a lot of the other.

SO, HOW *SHOULD* THIS EMAIL BE WRITTEN THEN?

It's easy. First, I'll delete it all and start from the beginning.

Do NOT try to impress her, yet don't be confrontational, either.

She ended up mis-spelling something on her only profile, right?

Well, you can use the same theme – just a little differently. What you have to do is alter your email's TONE so that it isn't too confrontational anymore.

And guess what…

I ALREADY GOT THE "HARDEST PART" DONE FOR YOU

You're all covered.

I have already finished an email that you can cut and paste right NOW to help you show off how challenging you actually are.

(Yes, the Online Dating Playbook™ will show you this, too :-)

You simply have to edit things a little bit and you can start right away.

This is how.

I hope you get this.

Steal anything you want.

SUBJ: YOU SHOULD KNOW...

...that your profile really appealed to me, but I'm still unsure about you. Can you
tell me more about... (mention something you liked about her profile here)

Sign your name

P.S. You should know that the first thing that got my attention was your
misspelling of (insert misspelled word here) on your profile. lol :-)

Again, this is all that I did.

Myke's email had an in-your-face tone to it that was too angry and confrontational as a whole.

When women have more than 30+ OTHER emails every day coming in from other guys all the time who are TRYING to get into her good graces by impressing her, she will not reply to you if you do the same thing.

You have to say things right, but in a CERTAIN manner. Don't hit on her right away because that is what all the other guys will do.

You have to different.

You have to be CHALLENGING.

Look at the very first sentence: "I'm still unsure about you". That happens to be the magic phrase in this email.

First, you have to learn…

DEREK RAKE'S FIRST RULE OF ONLINE SEDUCTION

This rule says that your email HAS to be opened. That's where it all begins, after all.

If she doesn't open your email, then you would have wasted 15 minutes typing it for nothing.

Here, I am using a line for the subject that will create CURIOSITY. 'You should know…'

Guess what?

There is only one way to learn what comes after that: by OPENING THE EMAIL. If she does this, your initial goal will be reached.

It works, right? Aren't you reading this yourself? :-)

As for the email's body, do you see what I did there?

I remained casual and cool and didn't hit on her with anything specific. Instead, I let her know how unsure I am about her.

(Which is how things should be since you haven't actually met yet.)

The best thing is…

I hid the misspelled bit in the ending. By then, the conversation is ending, so I turned my back and went back again.

That's why a P.S. is so great.

Plus, how I used it here was tied with the subject, so after reading the whole email, the loop that I started would have closed. By the end, the answer for my subject's comment will have been answered.

Tell me how things go for you.

Use these tips wisely :-)

Seduction On Steroids: EMail Seduction